IN HER EYES
This poem is a kind of experiment.i tried changing the rhyme scheme as i was suggested so while reading focus on , and. and capitals.I wrote it back in 11th but didnt showed as it got rejected.It idea is kind of inspired from a gujarati poem but i added my own story and gave it LAKSHYA's touch
In her eyes blue and round,
Getting lost is for bound.
Her eyes have a deep deep feeling
that a person is forced to stare
As those eyes have effect that's healing
so gazing and staring is fair
Her eyes-a piece of jewel,
that anyone would wish to steal.
But in eyes as kindness dwells,
the people are forced just to feel.
But to her the eyes are of no use
i think you all are totally confuse
It didn't take me long to find
That she is totally blind
She tried to stretch her hand,
with a stick in it.
To see where next step should land,
and if she gets a place to sit.
I stood up and walked with a pace,
to help her but went so near,
That i could clearly see her face,
We sat she tallked and i could hear.
While sitting eye met an eye,
hand met a hand,
a soul met another soul,
But God knows why.
it made my senses stand
I was just dumbstruck on the whole
Talking to her was like finding a treasure
And my happiness had absolutely no measure
We talked almost for an hour
Then a trian arrived and she boarded it
Now even though she is very far
I havn't forgotten her even a bit
Her face still lasts in my heart
Even though we are far far apart
In her eyes blue and round,
Getting lost is for bound.
Her eyes have a deep deep feeling
that a person is forced to stare
As those eyes have effect that's healing
so gazing and staring is fair
Her eyes-a piece of jewel,
that anyone would wish to steal.
But in eyes as kindness dwells,
the people are forced just to feel.
But to her the eyes are of no use
i think you all are totally confuse
It didn't take me long to find
That she is totally blind
She tried to stretch her hand,
with a stick in it.
To see where next step should land,
and if she gets a place to sit.
I stood up and walked with a pace,
to help her but went so near,
That i could clearly see her face,
We sat she tallked and i could hear.
While sitting eye met an eye,
hand met a hand,
a soul met another soul,
But God knows why.
it made my senses stand
I was just dumbstruck on the whole
Talking to her was like finding a treasure
And my happiness had absolutely no measure
We talked almost for an hour
Then a trian arrived and she boarded it
Now even though she is very far
I havn't forgotten her even a bit
Her face still lasts in my heart
Even though we are far far apart
